The feedback that I received with
my second Elevator Pitch was somewhat mixed, as well. One of the comments that
I received said that while the idea is great, some people could have issues
with it, and it’ll require truly convincing citizens of Gainesville to start
the project. They also said that the city is growing, and it would definitely
thrive with a new mall. I think that’s important because one of the biggest assemblies
of clients will be UF students, so this form of feedback is extremely valuable
to me. Jordan had really good feedback, as well – he indicated that while I’m
asking investors for support, I didn’t ask how or why I need it, which is
something I touched on in my newest video. The changes that I made in the new
video is I was a little bit more specific about some of the amenities that
Metropolis will have, and I talked about how and why it would be a smart investment
for investors.
Jared I think a new mall in Gainesville would be amazing! That’s an exciting and huge project to do. I know nothing at about how you would go about that, but I think getting investors and tailoring your pitch to them is very wise. All the amenities that you discussed in your pitch would probably cost as much as a small town which most people don’t have lying around just waiting to be used. Great pitch!
ReplyDeleteHey Jared,
ReplyDeleteYou did a nice job on this elevator pitch! I liked how you appealed to the community after describing the numerous benefits that your project would bring to the Gainesville community. I think that your appeal to them really shows them that you care about making Gainesville a better place. Again, great job on this pitch.